Friday, 29 November 2013
Draft 2 of trailer
This is the second draft of our trailer.We have decided to change the sountrack on the trailer as from audience feedback they didnt really like it.today me and nicole are looking for a new sountrack to put with the trailer.
Wednesday, 27 November 2013
Update - Font name
We have chosen to change our text due to some audience feedback.Also we have changed the name of our trailer because it didnt really fit the theme and story line of our film anymore.
Tuesday, 26 November 2013
Mrs D
You are working really well. I like some of your mes and your ideas are good. I like the start - the end becomes very repetitive. Are you providing enough for your audience? I'm not a huge fan of your font at the end. You might want to rethink this. I really like the shot where the trainers come towards the camera.
Update
We chose to add another part into the trailer which will help develop the storyline and make it more clear to the audience.We are going to have our media teacher setting a task for the students then the story will follow on from this, we are going to place this picture on the board behind her as a 'prop' for what she is talking about.
Monday, 25 November 2013
Thursday, 21 November 2013
Draft 1 of trailer Hunted
This is the first draft of the trailer Hunted.We have gained audience feedback of the trailer in previous lessons this week, so in Fridays lesson we are going to make some more changes and will be filming some more scenes on Sunday of this week.We also need to make sure our editing is up to scratch including transitions,music,captions and filters.
Wednesday, 20 November 2013
Ancillary Prep - poster analysis
Today i began analysing some posters for ideas for the ancilary i used the inspiration of 9 frames software to create this but because i dont need to analyse 9 posters, i have used my own of 4 frames.Which i created on serif.
Mrs D
Well done Charlotte. You are keeping to your deadlines and regularly updating to your blog. Keep up the good work.
Tuesday, 19 November 2013
Ancillary Task - Prep
Today me and nicole decided that we were going to do a webstite for our trailer and also a poster.This will enable us to use both our different skills together as a group and both contribute equally.
OCR Weebly- Trailer Feedback
ET productions trailer-Infliction
Good transitions of sound and scenes
Iconography is clear and well thought about
Storyline is clear and understandable
Variety of captions and shots
Many locations included
Dialogue included
Controlled use of camera
Variety and close attention to framing
Mise en scene is well thought up
35 MARKS
Blink Trailer
One location is effective
Good sound effects included
Variety of shots
Mise en scene is also well thought
Tension built up in the soundtrack
Slow to fast captions are good and effective-builds up tension
Transitions from frames are good
Doesnt have much meaning but the story line is good
Needs more clear meaning- who is the girl? why is she there?
Controlled use of the camera steady shots etc
Most framing is placed in the centre not much variation
Lots of captions are included
31 MARKS
Good transitions of sound and scenes
Iconography is clear and well thought about
Storyline is clear and understandable
Variety of captions and shots
Many locations included
Dialogue included
Controlled use of camera
Variety and close attention to framing
Mise en scene is well thought up
35 MARKS
Blink Trailer
One location is effective
Good sound effects included
Variety of shots
Mise en scene is also well thought
Tension built up in the soundtrack
Slow to fast captions are good and effective-builds up tension
Transitions from frames are good
Doesnt have much meaning but the story line is good
Needs more clear meaning- who is the girl? why is she there?
Controlled use of the camera steady shots etc
Most framing is placed in the centre not much variation
Lots of captions are included
31 MARKS
Monday, 18 November 2013
Audience Feedback On Trailer
In todays lesson we watched everyones trailers and commented on what we thought was good and what we could improve.We gained comments from people in the class, some ideas are:
-There was small dialogue so maybe include some more
-Add more shocking frames
-Think about iconography
-How can the killer have their own style
-Is the killer male or female - make more clear
-The text at the beginning can be more slow
-Add more footage
-Build up the story line more for the viewer - make it more misleading
-Good use of MES ,storyline and sound
-Story line is good
-News flash is effective
-Camera filters are good
-Clips cooperate well with each other
-Good transitions
-Slow shots into faster ones is effective
-Set the scene well with captions
-There was small dialogue so maybe include some more
-Add more shocking frames
-Think about iconography
-How can the killer have their own style
-Is the killer male or female - make more clear
-The text at the beginning can be more slow
-Add more footage
-Build up the story line more for the viewer - make it more misleading
-Good use of MES ,storyline and sound
-Story line is good
-News flash is effective
-Camera filters are good
-Clips cooperate well with each other
-Good transitions
-Slow shots into faster ones is effective
-Set the scene well with captions
Sunday, 17 November 2013
Update
Today i recorded the sound effect of the girl screaming for the trailer, i also took pictures of the masked killer with a knife in their hands.
Thursday, 14 November 2013
Update
Today we added in the soundtrack for the trailer. We edited it in some ways to make it unique, we also made some changes to scenes, for example: swapping some scenes around.
Tuesday, 12 November 2013
Monday, 11 November 2013
Update
Over the weekend, we did some more filming of scenes to go in the trailer.We also discussed the music we would be using in the trailer and have decided that we are going to combine two of the music samples together.
Thursday, 7 November 2013
Potential Music For trailer
Having a look on YouTube Me and Nicole discovered some videos that could work well as a soundtrack to our trailer.In the lesson tomorrow we are going to record us and others preferably the target audience on which one we think will work well with the trailer.
Wednesday, 6 November 2013
Script for the trailer
As some of our trailer features dialogue we thought it would be a good idea to create a script.I use Wix to create this.
http://edgyn69.wix.com/script
Here is the link to the website.I will need to add more things onto this once the trailer is nearly completeted or our rough copy has been produced.
http://edgyn69.wix.com/script
Here is the link to the website.I will need to add more things onto this once the trailer is nearly completeted or our rough copy has been produced.
Tuesday, 5 November 2013
Updates
Here is some evidence of us editing on the mac.I was putting in clips from filming sessions and editing the colour and brightness of the clips to make them more in the genre of the film.
Monday, 4 November 2013
Update
Today we are uploading more of the filming onto the mac and editing it to try and meet our deadline for the rough copy which is next week.
Friday, 1 November 2013
Timeline
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