Tuesday, 26 November 2013

Mrs D

You are working really well. I like some of your mes and your ideas are good. I like the start - the end becomes very repetitive. Are you providing enough for your audience? I'm not a huge fan of your font at the end. You might want to rethink this. I really like the shot where the trainers come towards the camera.
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  1. Charlotte Wells27 November 2013 at 01:18

    Thanks Miss.We will think of your feedback and change some of our ideas.

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