Question 3 - Evaluation Planning

I am going to record my voice of what I have learnt from the audience feedback and some examples of the feedback that we were given.I will then create a video with pictures of what our products look like before and after audience feedback.

Planning-
-There was small dialogue so maybe include some more
-Add more shocking frames
-Think about iconography
-How can the killer have their own style
-Is the killer male or female - make more clear
-The text at the beginning can be more slow
-Add more footage
-Build up the story line more for the viewer - make it more misleading
-Good use of MES ,storyline and sound
-Story line is good
-News flash is effective
-Camera filters are good
-Clips cooperate well with each other
-Good transitions
-Slow shots into faster ones is effective
-Set the scene well with captions                        
-There are no copyright issues- an original idea
-Need to create or keep someone alive for a character the audience can relate too
-Good ideas
-The audience liked the ideas for the camera angles in some points of the trailer/film

Poster (old)
-bigger text
-Make the moon have a glow

Poster (new)
-Make the text have a glow or a reflection
-Put the hand below the image so it looks like it is grabbing her


Website

Maybe add some music in the back ground, like something creepy

Maybe show all of the logo?

Like the boxes!